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Review by Debbie M
Rated: E | (4.5)
Brilliant how you've twisted this around to say the exact opposite of what you truly mean. Subtle yet profound (does that make any sense at all? Hope you know what I mean by that.) . No suggestions for improvement. I'm no expert or editor. Great work. Carry on.

Best of luck in the New Year ;

Debbie M.
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Review by Debbie M
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wondeful little poem! You definately have a clear understanding of ironic humor. As I've mentioned before, if ever you have the chance and/are so inclined, read a bit of Roald Dahl's poetry. Very tongue-in-cheek, as well.
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Review by Debbie M
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love, love, love this. Poetic justice. Reminds me somewhat of a poem I once read by Roald Dahl about a pig farmer eaten by his own livestock. Dark comedy, to be sure...but very effective. Well done.
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Review of Shovelchest Bob  
Review by Debbie M
Rated: E | (4.5)
Once again, Brian, excellent work. You needn't feel so unsure of yourself. You know how popular the Transformers were. :::smiles::: Kids love the idea of inatimate objects coming to life and you've phrased the incantation quite well. Good luck with it.
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Review by Debbie M
Rated: E | (4.5)
I LOVE this style of poetry ; of storytelling. It reminds me so much of the sort of thing I read and dreamt of as a child and of what I wish to write now. Never lose your fancy ; always dare to dream.
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