Wow! This is an awesome poem. The message and the idea is wonderful. It's truly amazing what they do over there. Defending our country and all. I pray for them.
But anyway, this is a great poem. I really like the style. Keep up the great writing.
This is really good. You really show your love for Ireland, Irish ways, and traditions. I like the rhyme. It flows very well. It makes me what to read more. The only thing I can see that you may want to correct is a few spelling errors through out the poem.
Good writing.
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