This whole story is written in third person. Please give me opinions. Thanks.
|It's dark. Kekewey is hiding. Is already in the room but is hiding. Akari knows this. Kekewey is scared. Doesn't want to come out. Doesn't want to see. Is afraid to give in. Akari knows this. Kekewey is afraid of Akari, wants to come out, but is afraid.
Silly Kekewey, does not need be afraid of small, weak, useless, insignificant Akari-couldn't possibly harm Kekewey. Kekewey is stronger, Kekewey is better! …but Kekewey does not understand this, Kekewey fears innocent, sweet, weaker Akari.
Akari does not understand this. Akari only wanted to play with Kekewey before, when Kekewey allowed Akari to play. Akari hurt Kekewey. Made Kekewey bleed too much…but Kekewey makes Akari bleed all the time. Makes Akari hurt all over! Kekewey does not care. But Kekewey cared when Akari hurt Kekewey.
…Because Akari nearly killed Kekewey…
No, not true! Akari was only playing with Kekewey. Like Akari wants to play with Kekewey now. But Kekewey hid Kekewey's toys from Akari. Kekewey fears Akari. Akari thinks this is funny. Kekewey should not fear Akari, but Kekewey does.
Kekewey thinks Akari is dangerous. Kekewey is wrong. Akari knows this. Kekewey is a liar, Kekewey is intrigued, Kekewey is curious, Kekewey wants Akari to play with Kekewey, wants Akari to carve pretty patterns into Kekewey's skin.
Kekewey wants Akari to hurt Kekewey, wants to scream in pain and feel the blood pouring from Kekewey's body. Wants to struggle against the bonds wrapped around Kekewey's wrists till they too bleed. Kekewey wants these things but Kekewey wants something else. Akari knows. Akari has always known.
Akari knows this. Kekewey wants Akari most of all. Kekewey thinks Akari is beautiful.
Kekewey doesn't like it when Akari makes such 'false accusations.' But Akari knows! Kekewey wants Akari, craves Akari! Kekewey needs Akari! Akari thinks it must be unbearable for Kekewey to see Akari like this, so beautiful, pale naked sweaty skin glowing in the moonlight. Kekewey must think Akari is pretty all sticky, sweaty, bare, and bleeding.
Akari knows Kekewey will give in. Knows Kekewey cannot hide in the shadows forever.
Akari wants Kekewey to come out. Will make Kekewey come see Akari. Shifts slightly catching Kekewey's attention. Kekewey has been glancing at pretty beautiful Akari for some time, never watching. Glancing. Now is staring Akari knows. Is watching anxiously. Moving slightly sitting up right and dangling legs over the foot of the bed. Kicking legs back and forth slightly. Kekewey is watching. Akari knows Kekewey is watching now. Trying to look away but is watching. Kekewey is getting flushed Akari knows.
Though Akari cannot see Kekewey in the shadows, Kekewey is turning red. Kekewey's eyes watching Akari's legs move across each other, the barely audible sound seeming almost deafening to Kekewey's ears as Akari's legs brush against each other lightly.
Kekewey must be hot now. Must be sticky with sweat. Slowly Akari's legs stop swinging. Akari knows Kekewey must be hot. It's the middle of summer after all, and Kekewey still wears the cloths of which Akari has already discarded on the floor.
Akari smiles innocently, tilting head to the side like a curious puppy. Akari knows Kekewey thinks Akari looks pretty. Sweaty sticky damp hair over Akari's eyes.
Akari knows Kekewey wants to go to Akari, wants to feel Akari's soft skin. Wants to play with Akari. Kekewey wants to take out Kekewey's shiny-pretty toy's and play now, wants to play with Akari, wants to make Akari bleed, wants to make Akari hurt. Kekewey wants to make Akari suffer!
Akari would not mind it now, Akari wants to play.
Kekewey is interested now. Was not interested before, but is very very interested now. Kekewey likes Akari like this. Likes Akari a lot. Akari is different at night. Not like Akari usually is. Doesn't feel like Akari usually does.
Kekewey likes Akari like this so much Akari knows. Kekewey wants Akari so much now it hurts. Shift Akari's legs, part them, lean forward and grip the bed letting sweaty sticky damp hair cover Akari's eyes completely. Akari can still see. Can still sense. Kekewey must like this. Must like Kekewey's Akari to be so pretty Kekewey can almost not stand it.
Kekewey is distracted. Kekewey wants Akari so much now Kekewey cannot always remember to breathe. Kekewey is most definitely hot now. Hot and sticky. Akari wants to see Kekewey, wants Kekewey to come out and play with Akari. Like Kekewey wants to play with Akari. But Kekewey will not come out just yet. Akari knows this. Akari knows what Kekewey really wants. Kekewey wants to play with Akari. Not with knives. Not to hurt. Just to play. Kekewey wants to play. Like Akari wants Kekewey to play.
Kekewey is angry. Kekewey doesn't like it when Akari spouts so many lies. Kekewey doesn't like it at all. Kekewey shifts in the darkness. Kekewey is wanting now to make Akari suffer. Akari knows this. Akari knows what Kekewey wants more then to make Akari suffer. Kekewey wants to have Akari. To make Akari Kekewey's so much it hurts.
Kekewey wants to consume Akari completely. Kekewey wants to ravish Akari. Wants to feel Akari writhe in ecstasy beneath Kekewey. Kekewey wants Akari so much Kekewey can hardly stand it.
…Kekewey wants Akari yes? Akari does not mind. Akari is offering. Kekewey can have Akari if Kekewey wishes. Akari promises to not hurt Kekewey this time. Will not touch Kekewey's toys again if Kekewey will only play with Akari…
Beckon Akari does. Knows Kekewey wants to come out. Knows Kekewey will. Kekewey shifts in the darkness. Is ready to come out Akari knows. Wants to see Akari now. Wants to play with Akari now.
Hours fly by. Kekewey has been playing. Playing, playing, playing! Running Kekewey's fingers all over Akari's body. Tasting Akari. Making Akari moan and gasp when Kekewey rubs against Akari. Sometimes making Akari scream and cry out. Making Akari bleed. Making Akari hurt. Making Akari suffer. Punishing Akari. Akari does not mind. It feels good when Akari knows why Akari is being punished.
Akari is being punished for lying. Kekewey doesn’t like it when Akari spouts such lies. Doesn't like it when Akari says Kekewey thinks Akari is beautiful. Doesn't like it when Akari says Kekewey wants Akari so much. Doesn't like it when Akari says Akari is Kekewey's favorite thing.
Kekewey says Kekewey hates Akari. Does not like Akari even a little bit. Does not think Akari is pretty. Does not care to have Akari at all. Akari is not favorite.
But Akari knows! Kekewey wants Akari, craves Akari! Kekewey needs Akari! Akari knows! Kekewey can not stand to see Akari like this, so beautiful, pale naked sweaty skin glowing in the moonlight. Kekewey does think Akari is pretty all sticky, sweaty, bare, and bleeding! Kekewey does! Akari is favorite! Is pretty! Kekewey wants Akari!