a senryu for spring
you and I, a minyan
the promised land is wholeness
together we call spring
Author's note:A minyan is a Jewish term denoting a minimum number of participants for prayer. Generally, ten people.
yes, yes, I know the syllable count is wrong
realized that after I posted...well...what the heck...I like it anyway. Some schools of thought aren't so rigid about the syllables anyway.
Written for: "Haiku and Senryu: A Contest and More...."
received an honorable mention