Take Me

Fall into a free-versed one night stand. ANY critique greatly appreciated.

Tear it back, threadbare and daring
Drop to the floor and quit your staring
I'm ready to take a leap tonight
Falling hard into silk sheets and bodies wrapped in tight
Take me.

Take me
Far beyond the mountains and rolling hills
Far beyond the babbling brooks and cool, calm streams
Gasping for breath between orgasmic screams
Deep into the fire within your soul
The passion that burns
The hunger, the ache, the ultimate goal
I need
I crave
My master
My slave
Take me
Oh take me
Into your heat and under my sheets
Into the secret world where two naked bodies meet
Waste no time, I plead
I entreat
Take me.

Plunge deep into me and remember
That I may forget
What wickedness there is among beauty
And what beauty lies within the wicked.
The wicked grow strong and the strong are pretty
And they light up the skies in this great big city
But what beauty there is in lust devoid of pity
Take me
Take me
Take me
Yes...