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by Fyn
Rated: E · Poetry · Other · #1234673
Revision revisited
Cooking with Words


Rough draft is finished
written in a rush of words,
simmering pot of ideas
flared to high,
boiled over--


Ripe with sense of achievement
never-the-less:
it is time to render.

Notepad chopping block,
red pen knife
slices and dices.

Chop tenses, grate ideas,
Toss words, peel paragraphs,
Sprinkle descriptive seasonings to taste,
trim rough edges, find the core.

Set to rise,
to bake, and cool:
Place on the plate
with style and garnish.
Serve immediately.
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