down, down

A free - writing exercise. Is the imagery okay? How can I improve? Please, review!

It’s like falling
Down, down
Into the pit of your soul
And finding warmth and comfort
And someone waiting for you.
It is a feeling of my heart wanting to explode with joy
And cry with relief.
Someone who can get in my skin
And crawl around my mind.
She is the passionate pursuit of everyday life.
I cannot wait to graft our souls together forever.