the wonder

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One day a girl went outside she was on the swings all of sudden she turns around notices or noticed that her brother motorbike was there in the parking garage. "oh i wanna ride it"she said to herself in her minded . she was hopped on the ATV and went up the road. Now it was dinner time and it was now 5:00 pm and she hadn't showed .Her family started to calling her cell phone but she didn't answer her family's calls .Her family was worried. she hadn't seen i or out the house .the thought popped in her family's minded she hadn't been seen since 2:00 pm.had she been kidnapped?