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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1281919

I wrote about how being abused neglected made me feel. Short and to the point!


I would very much like some feedback on this. I would like to know if this touches something other than "My Heart". It's the shortest piece I have done with so few words and I am unsure of its worth, besides to myself.  Pleasw let me know what you think.

I hope each person who reads this finds their own meaning, it was enlightening for me. Enjoy and Read on!         
                                                    Myladylibra


Seperated, alienated inside...
Anger, unsated hardens...
Love, overrated claims...
Emotions, devestated breaks...
Death, penetrated...
My Heart


Christine McDonald 2007
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