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Rated: · Poetry · Personal · #1413799

My feelings at an exact moment written out in 5 minutes...

The air escapes away
holding my breath wont
help this hurt.
i miss you
and most of all
i miss me
what seemed right is
oh so wrong
im aware
my eyes wide open
my perception was blurry
but your oh so clear
can't you hear me?
my heart and soul
oh so real
can't you feel?
You must see what i have
hear what i say
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