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Rated: E · Poetry · Dark · #1447071
An old poem of mine. Still open for critique.
Raining Superiority


I used you as a friend
I used you as a tool
You gave me your life
And you followed all the rules
And without a fight
You spoke no words
You were weak
And defenseless
Like I knew you were
You were deceived
You were betrayed
And you did nothing
But cower in the shades
All your hopes and fears
Torn to shreds
I feel so superior
Now that you feel dead
Your eyes show nothing
But sadness and misery
You should’ve seen it coming
So now all I could do is smile
At my sweet little game
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