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Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Experience · #1467527

a poem from the perspective of a alcoholic

Trapped in this bottle
I long to be free
It started as fun
but now this posion is killing me
just a drink among friends
I didn't think it would hurt
just a good time we would have dont you see
Now my friends are all gone
as I sit by myself
and you sure aren't the friend
I thought that you'd be

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