What's Broken

another poem which i have written in less than five minutes, please rate!

Pick up the peices,
can you fix my heart?
the darkness which consumes our lives from day to day,
has tarnished and broken,
slowly chipping away,

There's nothing left here,
but shreds of what has been,
a life which from this moment,
has become unseen,

Is this a dream?
am i far away?
can i find what is missing,
What you have  hidden away,

the cuts anseen the blood runs deep,
a reminder, a tatoo,
a scar that will keep,
forever in your mind, forever in your heart,
until the peices, revealed,
when this feeling departs.