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Rated: E · Poetry · Contest · #1511519

Form -The Shadorma - Short poem about the doorways of life...

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The Hallways of Life… a Shadorma

Dank hallways
Seemingly devoid
Of passion.
Colorless.
And yet, I move t’ward their doors -
Hopeful in my quest…



How is the Shadorma set up?

A syllabic poem. It has six lines - with a syllable pattern:3/5/3/3/7/5

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