this was the finale version for judging. It still needs some work.
Her sightless eyes cried remembrance at playful splashing.
A mother on the beach with shielded sun eyes gazed at every sound.
“Hunnie, Don’t play too far out.”
Her hearing gauged distance like a hawk finding prey.
Her head never turned away, not once.
It’s hard to hear a playful splash crashing beneath other sound waves.