It Never Rains ~Thoughts and Feelings~

This is a poem I wrote for a girl, I need opinions on it.

DECEMBER 10, 2008

It Never Rains ~Thoughts and Feeling
~For That Special Girl~




It never rains
When you’re here
To dry up the tears of my heart’s open sky

It never hurts
When I look at you and say I love you
Because I know you’ll say it back with the truest of intentions

It never feels
Like anything other than real
When I look into your eyes

I have never been in love
It was all a plan
To bring me from the depths of self pity and woe, to holding you in my arms

I love with a passion that drains me
Of every last breath
Spent gladly on you

It never rains
When I can hear the sound of your voice
And know that not all hope is lost