Cold Water / Modern Sijo

My first attempt at Modern Sijo, a form of Korean poetry.

Cold water of white, melted snow
That trickles down mountains.
Rivulets that joins some others
And begins a great trip
Where little seeds await a drink
To start life as flowers.


This is my first try at a Modern Sijo a form of Korean poetry. No title is required of this poem, but if I had to give one I would call it “Cold Water.” Please look at entry #627373 from kansaspoet for more information on this and The Traditional and the Modern Sijo.