Dreamless Sleep (working title)

My first public attempt at poetry. Hope you enjoy, please review. I promise to do the same

Parting the mists ahead
My mutilated form is led
By my faithful steed
With bloodied knees
Through the mist
My steed goes
Until he comes to the place
Where the icy river flows

Into the water we were taken
Where he and I shall never awaken
And there we shall rest, deep in sleep
Forever in our undisturbed sleep