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Ordinary Heroes |
| Ordinary heroes Work hard every day, To do as they’re trained Save a life, Put out a fire; blazing hot, Stop a crime; change a life, Protect the land of the free Until the day comes When the call requires A sacrifice most extraordinary In that instant become extraordinary heroes *Not so sure about this poem. Maybe I'll like it better later. Came to me too easily (10 minutes) right before bed, inspired by a song. Too common of a theme? 9/17/09: Thinking about changing the last stanza to "In that instant ordinary heroes/become legends". I'm also concerned that the first stanza rhymes and the rest doesn't. Not sure if that causes a flow issue or confusion for the reader. Edit points are included to allow specific comments for those who wish to provide them. Thanks! |