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Rated: E · Poetry · Other · #1608146

Another quick poem. Please critique

I come to you
emaciated
but
filled with emptyness and pain
won't you
fill me with your love
so I can feel whole again

I come to you as
an exhibitionist
helpless and exposed
will you
gaze upon me without laughter
at my truth disclosed

Take me
as I am
degenerate and scarred
and without
any judgement
hold me in your arms.

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