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MnM's brown bag
Hello.
MnM here. B)
Paper Doll Gang NEWBIE

I just read your piece {bitem: } and here are a few different colors from my brown MnM bag:

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Pace:

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You write to communicate to the hearts and minds of others what's burning inside you.  And we edit to let the fire show through the smoke.  ~Arthur Polotnik

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