Promise

The words within the brackets are lines that I want to cut. What do you think?

Baby can you hear me?
Can you see me?
Awake from the coffin he's imprisoned you in
You must
I need you here
He's dug his claws into your feeble body
Injected you with his lies
Filled you with his poison
And moulded you out of shape.
I'm begging you arise and awake from your grave
Run from him
Run
Promise me you won't believe his lies
Promise me you won't feast in his underworld.

I beg you.
Close your eyes and shut your ears
(I'll guide you.)
Do not let him overtake you
(Promise me you'll still look at me in the same way
Promise me you'll hold me like you did
Promise?)