%%USERNAME%%
%%ACCWORDS%%
%%ONOFF%%
Est. %%EST%%
un:
%%REPLACE%%
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
|
Send Email
Send Merit Badge
Send Awardicon
Request Review: %%RRINFO%%
Comments: (optional)
X
Get Started
·
Need Help?
·
Login
·
Signup
Get Started
·
Need Help?
·
Login
·
Signup
Press '
enter
' or click the
to search all of Writing.Com.
Search where?
This Portfolio (sari_hays)
Any Genre
---------------
Any Type
-------------
All of Writing.Com
Any Genre
---------------
Reading
Any Type
-------------
Login / Sign Up
Create Something
Read & Review
>
Community
Community Feed
Site News
The Hub
Activities
Contests
Newsletters
The Blog Board
The Plug Page
Puzzle Hub
Message Forums
General Discussion
Noticing Newbies
Weekly Goals
Sponsored Items
Auto-Reward Items
Read a Newbie
Read & Review
Newsletter Archives
Please Review
Public Reviews
Review Forums
Request a Review
Merit Badges
Awarded Items
Book of Trinkets
Testimonials
>
Browse By Type
About Our Item Types
Static Items
Poetry
Short Stories
Articles
Prose
Essays
Fiction
Non-fiction
Books
Blogs
Forums
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
>
Browse By Genre
Action/Adventure
Activity
Adult
Animal
Arts
Biographical
Business
Career
Children's
Comedy
Community
Computers
Contest
Contest Entry
Crime/Gangster
Cultural
Dark
Death
Detective
Drama
Educational
Emotional
Entertainment
Environment
Erotica
Experience
Family
Fanfiction
Fantasy
Fashion
Finance
Folklore
Food/Cooking
Foreign
Friendship
Genealogy
Ghost
Gothic
Health
History
Hobby/Craft
Holiday
Home/Garden
Horror/Scary
How-To/Advice
Inspirational
Internet/Web
LGBTQ+
Legal
Medical
Melodrama
Men's
Military
Music
Mystery
Mythology
Nature
News
Nonsense
Occult
Opinion
Paranormal
Parenting
Personal
Pets
Philosophy
Political
Psychology
Reference
Regional
Relationship
Religious
Research
Reviewing
Romance/Love
Satire
Sci-fi
Scientific
Self Help
Spiritual
Sports
Steampunk
Supernatural
Technology
Teen
Thriller/Suspense
Tragedy
Transportation
Travel
Tribute
War
Western
Women's
Writing
Writing.Com
Young Adult
Tue,
Mar 10, 2026
8:08am
EDT
Members: 548
Guests: 7,609
Total Online: 8,157
SPONSORED ITEMS
Please Review
This is a page to request reviews for static items and books.
Beachcomber
She's lost. Will he find her this time?
A CRY FOR A CHILD
A story of a friend's resurfaced childhood memory.
The Ancient Samauri
When looking back shows the seeds price of value, and looking forward fills the debtpeace
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Through the Eyes of the Lord
Guided Meditation on Worship
The Love Machine
The ultimate love match?
"Thank You RAOK"
If you've received a RAOK upgrade you can say "thanks" here.
Melancholy Scribblings
Found in a notebook dated 1991. Apparently I was depressed over my non-existent love life.
READ A NEWBIE
The Windmill
I saw an old windmill today, it made feel small.
Family unfolded
Maybe they’re not as perfect as I thought
Just a Working Monday
It was work for me today. The kind that no one likes, the kind that is on a Monday.
The Human Way
A poem about my struggles in socializing and connecting
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Whistle-Stop
When "thank you" will never be enough. Writer's Cramp Entry 953 words
Doubtful
A poem about a farmer who suspects the neighbour could steal her Chickens.
Melancholy Scribblings
Found in a notebook dated 1991. Apparently I was depressed over my non-existent love life.
Chalk Dust & Broomsticks, Chapter 14
Children at Primrose Primary School are all suffering with a mysterious ailment - magic?
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1637638-Cold
Portfolio
Reviews
Biography
Notebook
Community
▼
Fans
★
★
★
★
★
(5)
Details
Cold
by
AhoySari
Rated:
E
·
Poetry
·
Dark
· #
1637638
How could you?
Intro Rated:
E
Size: 0.28 KB
Created: January 19th, 2010 at 2:50
pm
Modified: January 19th, 2010 at 2:50
pm
Paging:
Previous Item
·
Next Item
Location:
My Portfolio
Genres:
Dark
,
Emotional
,
Experience
Access:
No Restrictions
A bitter cold in my heart
Where you cut me apart
Falling
Down.
Laying sprawled on the ground
Tears stream down my face
So sad and out of place
You're long gone
Leaving me
With this bitter cold
In my heart
© Copyright 2010 AhoySari
(sari_hays at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates have been granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1637638-Cold
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 8:08am on Mar 10, 2026 via server WEBX2.