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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1674430
A poem about love. I'm only a beginner, feedback is much appreciated.
The vines of friendship
The ones that connect us all
The vines are tightening
And blossoming

The grip is too tight,
Breathing is impossible
Blinded, tortured, numb
Out of control

It became a force
A cruel force
Faster than any train
Stronger than any man
Scarier than any monster

I can’t recognize myself anymore
And I like it
Now, I will fall apart
From the inside out
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