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Rated: E · Poetry · Contest Entry · #1685145
For the Rhythm and Rhyme Contest, a tri-fall.
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There lies a sand castle
made of dreams,
only for you and me to see.
Holding hands we amble,
as soft beams
gleam in our eyes with profound glee.

Brimming with divine love,
our august home towering high.
God showers from above,
as on the wings of joy we fly.

Forgetting past sorrow
we embrace
with the firm promise of a new,
ecstatic tomorrow
and erase
darkness and to it say adieu.

Form: Tri-fall
The Tri-fall, created by Jan Turner, consists three 6-line stanzas, for a total of 18 lines.
The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8.
This form requires little to no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter

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