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The ongoing letters between Annabell, a publisher, and Edward, a writer.
Dear Edward,

    Let’s  cut  to  the  chase;  your  plot  is  good  but  your  Christine  is  weak.  I  made  the  same  notes  last  week  as  I  did  this  week  on  the  draft. 

    Why  are  you  ignoring  my  crits?

  Does  it  give  you  some  sort  of  smug  satisfaction  to  ignore  my  help?

  You  should  know  by  now  that  until  you  fix  what  I  told  you  to  that  I  will  not  go  any  further  into  the  story.  You  are  therefore  wasting  both  of  our  time.  Please  refer  to  my  notes  in  editing  and  make  those  corrections.  I  really  would  love  to  read  the  rest  of  the  story.  These  are  very  small  and  simple  corrections  I  am  not  asking  you  to  re-write  the  entire  plot!

                                                                      Thank  you,



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