by Sam Poe
The ongoing letters between Annabell, a publisher, and Edward, a writer.
Let’s cut to the chase; your plot is good but your Christine is weak. I made the same notes last week as I did this week on the draft.
Why are you ignoring my crits?
Does it give you some sort of smug satisfaction to ignore my help?
You should know by now that until you fix what I told you to that I will not go any further into the story. You are therefore wasting both of our time. Please refer to my notes in editing and make those corrections. I really would love to read the rest of the story. These are very small and simple corrections I am not asking you to re-write the entire plot!