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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1800180

Open to interpretation.

She holds breath in quivering lungs
Lids open like gates
Allowing the light to touch water
A burning union
Her thought is nothing
The vanity entrenched
She stretches to grasp the expanse
Pretentious and suffocating
Erotic and overwhelming
Could there be anyone less deserving of the view?
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