originally wrote in 11th grade for my fiancee. yes i was engaged, what do you think of it?
|they say true love is hard to find but i think i have found it with you.
i have never know love before but thanks to you i can't live without it.
you are the one that i want, the one that i need, the love of my life.
my love for you is endless like a rainbow, you can never find the end of it.
love like mine is rare, hard to find, and something that a girl would dream of finding.
i know that i will love forever for the rest of my life because i found you.
(year later update)
boy do i feel stupid now, but even though we are through i can still say this is a good poem, because it isn't about who inspired the poem but how many people you can move with it. maybe i will have love like this again someday, but it still is a poem i am glad that i wrote, enough about me let's see some reviews.