November Rain

This is my first ever peice of poetry and although a little dark in nature.

Deep inside my dark heart cries
Nothing left inside but lies
A lingering thought that haunts my life
That dark deep hole whose name be strife
I've given up there's no more fight
tonight I know the time is right
Inside my soul can't take the strain
So sodden by November Rain
A glance, a stare, a backward look
a second later...My life I took?