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Rated: · Poetry · Foreign · #1879831

I am a starting Haiku writer and would love to hear what others think of my writing I'm 14

Time is our essence
We all finally run out
That is our life's end

The young antelope
dashes through evergreen fields
trying to escape

The Cherry Blossoms
Dance in the whispering wind
Mother Natures love
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