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This was a quick poem I wrote, not sure how I feel about it.

Every night I’m haunted by your star
Going under and taking over me.
It all seems imaginary
Thoughtless whispers seem farther away
You make me feel like I’m on cloud nine
I’ll be your snow white queen if you lose control with me
You’re the only one, all that I’m living for
Am I good enough?
I’ll be anything for you
Before the dawn we’ll go anywhere, even in death
Your lies will bring me to life and I will surrender
Hello, angel of mine, together again we’ll make a sweet sacrifice
My last breath will be in your arms
Breathe no more, my immortal tourniquet