poem for my husband for Valentines and for the traditional poetry contest. please review.
Love is a splendid breath of fresh air,
It makes me feel like I'm at a fair.
It makes me happy,
Not at all sappy.
It makes me feel complete.
I like this feeling we share,
It’s a dream I can’t describe, so I don’t dare.
A marvelous feeling, deep in my heart,
I hope we are never apart.
You complete me and I you.
We took the oath, so our love lasts forever,
We took on the marriage endeavor.
I love you and you love me too.
I know we will never be through,
I see it when you look at me, then my heart will melt.