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Rated: E · Poetry · Adult · #1923323
Seeing the same person no matter what season it is of the year.
This is a poem I am working on I would like to know what everyone thinks if it flows or perhaps what other wording I should use. I would appreciate any input its for a publication I'm working on.

I see seasons in your eyes

You reflect warmth on occasion,
Your thoughts are a cool breeze of inspiration,
I know that when I fall and cover the ground,
Footsteps of gentle comfort belong to thee.
No matter the changes,
Or whatever the times,
I will always,
See seasons in your eyes!
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