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Please help me improve my usage of punctuation. I would very much like to improve. Thanks. |
| Cuts deeper than Love can breathe into Shame peers into my heart upon thy look to my inkblotted soul. Yearn for you yet cannot allow My own blemish to soot your fresh snowfall and crisp air. Hear but listen not beyond my words How I ache to totally submerse myself In your arms that have held me in my crying nightmares and memories alike. Those which have accepted what I cannot let go. You are the eagle by which the broken winged swallow flies And, desperate as she may, Cannot keep up in the blistering winds of stubborn mindset. Wait not for me and my weakness. Wait not and listen not to my outcries of withered energy and pitfalls. My only wish is to see you rise to meet the sun While I may fall into deep slumber in purgatory. |