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Please help me improve my usage of punctuation. I would very much like to improve. Thanks.

Shattered glass buried deep
Within a weak body of a specter
It's light is failing, dimming,
flickering out as its life escapes it
it hides behind brick and stone
weakly calling out toe the passerby's
shattered glass buried deep
within a weak body of a specter
when finally
the light shuts off.
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