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Rated: E · Poetry · Other · #1972245

A poem, would love some feedback

Poem I I


Let not the birds prey upon mine face
for their sweet music be forever shunned
and let not the sun nor moon shine upon mine countenance
their light deserved better and merry faces
let not the beast steal what is meant for beauty
and let it live in solitude within its hideous form
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