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Rated: ASR · Other · Comedy · #2019053
I bite my tongue so much it's swollen
I feel so hypercritical
But truly, I'm just literal
Maybe I shouldn't review

You wrote of winter snow
And how the frost would blow
I've never seen frost blow. Have you?

Please don't rhyme orient
With the word disconnect
Pay attention. Don't be a yahoo.

Your verbal incontinence
Is a language offense.
Use brevity; get a clue.

Really, in a fairy tale
No one spends time in jail
Use a tower or dungeon. Undo!

Another fragmented sentence
Reading those is a penance.
Add verbs. Stick them in there with glue.

Were you awake when you wrote
About her leper's kink oat?
You've spelling problems up the wazoo.

I expect I can now write
A review that's more polite
Since I'm purged of all that.Whew!
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