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Rated: E · Poetry · Opinion · #2102680

Oh how I look like my father

 my dad's twin Open in new Window. (E)
Oh how I look like my father
#2102680 by Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon


i see it daily
in my face I see his face
i am now my dad.

Note to reviewers: Yes I realize that "I" is a personal pronoun, thus capitalized. However in senryu or haiku poetry the rules of grammar, and particularly capitalization, are suspended. Thus there are no caps in either the title nor the body.
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