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Rated: E · Poetry · Nature · #2106420
A haiku inspired by a Newbie
 soothing water  (E)
A haiku inspired by a Newbie
#2106420 by Chris Breva - Graduate Student


alone in darkness
listening to a flowing stream
calming is the water


Author's note: caps and punctuation were intentionally omitted in honor of Japanese tradition.

I wrote this after reviewing the poem "Sounds" by A. M. Bradley, a newbie who has been on WDC for less than a month.

Here is "Sounds".


Sounds

As I sit alone in the darkness,
I hear the faint noise of water

It drips and runs around me,
calming me with its soothing sound

by

A. M. Bradley
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