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Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Relationship · #2159253

a poem about a relationship ending

black tears
red cheeks
ragged breathing
red eyes
four hours
non-stop
wondering if
wondering why
looking back
remembering
stop.
breathe.
no
too late
hot tears
climb from eyes
nobody there
comfort yourself
will it ever get better?
a question
that doesn't have
an answer
confusion.
hurt.
why.
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