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by Fae
Rated: E · Sample · Sci-fi · #2237808
This is the beginning of a novel I am working on. I wanted to get some feedback on it.
Without mind, without body, without soul. What is a man who has given up everything belonging to him in search of a greater form of existence? The answer is simple. He is a machine. A mind operating based on the outcome of millions of simultaneous calculations. A body once comprised of flesh, replaced by various augmentations made of metal and plastic. And with but a husk of what it means to be alive remaining in what some might generously consider a “living being,” the soul, a concept which by all calculations is incalculable, has lost its place of dwelling and is thus thrown out into a cold, darkness beyond the parameters of life.
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