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A poem in Shanzi form (described below poem) |
| Another year passes in my life Muscles and bones creak like dead branches Fresh thoughts and dreams still thrive within this aged physique. Shanzi: > 7 lines, unrhymed. > Syllable count 4/5 5/4 4/4/5. > Lines 1 & 2 introduce the subject. > Lines 3 & 4 amplify what is affected by the image/subject. > Line 5-7 focus on a new subject that complements & provides a meditative conclusion |