A poem I wrote a long time ago just wanted to share. Would love feedback. |
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Why can't I sleep? Is it really that strong? You fill my mind with feeling so deep, my breaths slow and long. I try to just fall asleep, but you take control of me. My mind secedes. I remember your eyes and how the remind me of the summertime. The thoughts take over like a grey fog. You're all I can think of. The chance of sleeping is long gone. It's feels great but also so wrong, I hope sleeping always takes this long. |
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