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An urban retelling of the Exile from Eden told from the perspective of a black family unit |
| Mama: “Where you at, baby?” Child: “I’m here, mama.” Mama: “What you doin’ o’er there?” Child: “I was hiding, mama.” Mama: “Why you hiding, honey child?” Child: “Cause I’m ugly.” Mama: “Who told you you were ugly? You’ve been hangin’ round that stump. I told you stay away from that place, baby. Why’d you not listen?” Child: “Mama, my friend was there. I wanted to.” Mama: “I told him to mind you. He’s not your friend, baby.” Child: “What happens now?” Mama: “I’m sorry, baby, but you can’t be here anymore. I gotta close this place for good. I love you, but you need to leave. When you’re ready, your brother’s gonna take you to our new home. Until then, you gotta learn to work—and I don’t mean something cushy. I mean blood, sweat, and tears. You’re gonna work ’til you can’t. You gotta get them hands dirty and callused; you’ll find bruises in places you never knew, and the thorns, especially, don’t care about what happens to you.” Child: “But mama!” Mama: “Be patient, baby. And mind yourself. Never forget where you came from. I love you.” |
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