Edit Chapter 1 Dream of Dragons

It is a edit of my first chapetr that is fixed

Chapter 1: Dream of Dragons.
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In the town of Truckville, a family is getting ready to move to Shadowville. The Blaze family is finishing loading their moving truck. Delta put his new bed in the moving truck in the packing box it came in. He has blue, wavy hair and blue eyes, and is wearing his black tight t-shirt, not his favorite black, blue dragon hoodie. His little sister Rylan has long brown hair, blue eyes, and a peach colored shirt. Their dad, Mick, has short brown hair and a black shirt. Their mom, wearing a green shirt and has long hair like Rylan.
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Delta’s friend Saven is helping them so he can spend more time with Delta before he goes. Saven has silver hair, gray eyes, and a wolf shirt. “Delta, you forgot your dragon writs band.”
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“Thanks, Saven. I don't want to lose it or forget you.” Delta thanked him.
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“Hey Delta, before we go get your hair dyed again and ask for a picture color so we can keep your beautiful blue hair, also take Saven with you so you can say goodbye,” Mary said.
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“Ok, Mom, I will, and I will miss Saven,” Delta answers as Saven hugs him.
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“I know that is why I want you to hang out last time because I never got to say goodbye to my best friend when I left my old home when I was 8,” Mary told Delta. “Now go.”
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Delta and Saven are at the Hair Dye shop and go inside. The Hair dye owner sees Delta and smiles. Delta asks for JJ, and the owner gets him.
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“Hey, Mr JJ, I am here to get my last hair dye before I move,” Delta said as he pulled out his money.
“Stop, their boy, it is free, it is the least I can do for being my best customer,”The owner says
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“Really, thank you, Mr. Maven,” Delta replied.
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“And here is a picture of the hair dye I use for your hair, so you can dye your hair your favorite blue,”Mr. JJ tells him as he hands it to Delta.
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“Thank you, Mr JJ. I was going to ask you for it,” Delta replied with gratitude.
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After one hour, Delta’s hair is back to its dark blue and light blue look. Then he says goodbye to Seven, and he is crying really badly. He goes home and leaves with his family for their new home. When they get to their new home, it is 5 times bigger than their old one. It is also blue, so Delta is happy.
“Wow, this place is so much bigger than our old home, and it is blue, my favorite color. I like it,” Delta said.
“We know, but since we got new jobs and your baby brother will be here soon, we got a 5-room house, 4 for us and a guest room for family,” Mick says as he parks in the driveway.
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“I can’t wait for him to be born and for big brother to visit soon,” Delta answered.
“I know you miss him, but he is too busy to come soon,” Mick says to Delta.
“Hey, Delta, since you are now 14, do you want to name him for us?” Mary asked Delta.
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“Really, I get to name him.” Delta was shocked. “I would be honored to”
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“Yes, Delta, so what is our new member's name?” Mick answered.
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“Jono sounds cool to me,” Delta said,
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“Jono,” Mick and Mary repeated.
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“Yeah, that is a cool name for him, thanks, Delta,” Mary said.
“Cool name for my baby brother,” Rylan said.
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Delta starts to get his room together. His wallpaper is a light blue, with a dragon poster, bedding, and dragon curtains. His deck is light gray and holds all his paper and stuff he loves. His closet is white and full of tight black shirts and 3 of his favorite dragon hoodies. His bathroom is white with blue tiles and a dragon toy in the bathroom.
“This is me with all my stuff in my room and bathroom,” Delta said to himself.
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After dinner, Delta goes to bed and starts to have a nightmare. He is surrounded by dark shadows and people in chains on the ground. He sees a man with pitch-black armor with scarlet red lines and black eyes, and he looks 10 feet tall.
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“I am Danta Skyrider, the king of the Aura-Drakes,” The man says.
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“Danta, let Delta go,” a voice behind Delta says as a beautiful girl with long white hair, blue eyes, and white armor with blue lines.
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“Kara, trying to stop me again,” Danta said with an evil laugh.
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“Yes,” Kara answered, “Delta, please don't pick up the blue scale.”
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