a sedoka (a japanese form) on orchids |
Petals, like white light, consoling my solitude; my refuge, in the pale pink of your lip. My heart’s chanting in champagne bubbles, tipsy, tearful, and bewitched. -------------------------------------------------- Sedoka is a japanese form with syllable-count as 1st line: 5 syllables 2nd line: 7 syllables 3rd line: 7 syllables 4th line: 5 syllables 5th line: 7 syllables 6th line: 7 syllables |