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Rated: ASR · Poetry · Romance/Love · #775805

I wrote this for the Advanced Poetry Workshop. This form is called a "Dodoitsu".

You are my *Heart*Love

Nish! truly have you loved me
Like a sunkissed flower does
love the hopping bumblebee ...
My wife! I love you!

© Dr. Taher


Author's Note:

The "Dodoitsu" is a four line Japanese poem that has love/romance as its theme. It has a total of 26 syllables, with 7 each in the first three lines and 5 in the last one.

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This is written for the Advanced Poetry prompt by Bianca!
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