I love you

Another of my love poems. Please read and tell me how it is.

I love you with all my heart,
so much it tears me apart.
I look at you every single day,
and my pain melts away.
My life becomes perfect,
the only thing I want is your kiss.
I feel your touch upon my skin,
and love starts to swell up within.
You look at me with all your love,
and I see the gift I was given from above.
I feel the love that we both share,
it goes down to every follicle of hair.
If I had to choose between me or you.
I'd keep your life and lose my own,
because there is more love to be shown.
I feel you when you're not around,
I'll love you even when I'm in the ground.
I hope you know and see our love.
I feel the angels singing above.