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Rated: E · Poetry · Personal · #994653
this is not one of my best but just an entry, wanting some critique
SWEATER

It was funny how I noticed his sweater
it was like it was new, or someone
had given it to him as a Christmas present
I wonder if it kept him warm
You see, I had a sweater on too
But I was still cold
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