I caved. I am told that I do too much telling and not enough showing in my writing to the point where writing was not fun anymore. To compensate, I am taking a script writing course and putting a screenplay together. So much FUN! It really caters to my strengths. Nothing I post is meant to be offensive. If you take it so, then you have too much time on your hands and need to write, write, write. "The Power Reviewers Group"  [E]